Comments for Logayn Wenner http://logaynwenner1.edublogs.org Another excellent Edublogs.org weblog Mon, 19 Jan 2009 01:39:20 -0500 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.2 hourly 1 Comment on Talking Through Technology by ritajeanstangherlin http://logaynwenner1.edublogs.org/2008/12/16/talking-through-technology/comment-page-1/#comment-3 ritajeanstangherlin Mon, 19 Jan 2009 01:39:20 +0000 http://logaynwenner1.edublogs.org/?p=8#comment-3 P1 format is perfect but a subject/verb lack of agreement "skills was" should be "were" and a typo. -2 Some spelling issues/typos and you did not space between each paragraph. -3 Your fifth paragraph summarizes and then contradicts your thesis. I agree that cell phones are too complicated, but the way you state your position, you undercut your arguement that it is the best invention. -10 No EC. P1 format is perfect but a subject/verb lack of agreement “skills was” should be “were” and a typo. -2

Some spelling issues/typos and you did not space between each paragraph. -3

Your fifth paragraph summarizes and then contradicts your thesis. I agree that cell phones are too complicated, but the way you state your position, you undercut your arguement that it is the best invention. -10

No EC.

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